tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post3567901064494274154..comments2023-10-24T12:50:38.199+01:00Comments on A Crimson Thread: Just Past The Centeralan1704http://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-90559757180400823542013-09-25T18:48:12.660+01:002013-09-25T18:48:12.660+01:00I loved the promise of trembling heart ! Very beau...I loved the promise of trembling heart ! Very beautiful Alan :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-45695167416752174752013-09-25T00:28:43.508+01:002013-09-25T00:28:43.508+01:00Beautiful & uplifting to read Alan ~ We find ...Beautiful & uplifting to read Alan ~ We find solace & hope when we listen to His words, even in our darkest times ~<br /><br />Have a lovely week ahead ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-91675115966264936542013-09-22T06:37:17.584+01:002013-09-22T06:37:17.584+01:00I treasure the promise..such a beautiful outlook. ...I treasure the promise..such a beautiful outlook. Fantastic piece!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-48832013801250933772013-09-21T18:50:12.494+01:002013-09-21T18:50:12.494+01:00"On the stroke of hope" - many good line..."On the stroke of hope" - many good lines in here! Thank you for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-5598026029662916132013-09-20T18:14:43.266+01:002013-09-20T18:14:43.266+01:00Your last stanza could stand alone, filled with me...Your last stanza could stand alone, filled with meaning and emotion. Nicely done.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-57357844084846114552013-09-20T13:10:32.444+01:002013-09-20T13:10:32.444+01:00Agree with humbird. That last line closes the poem...Agree with humbird. That last line closes the poem beautifully and with hope. The Imagery is well spent! I like this piece, Alan.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13980610386630622755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-6064456648250123452013-09-20T05:34:06.114+01:002013-09-20T05:34:06.114+01:00Lovely piece the detailing paints the journeyLovely piece the detailing paints the journeyTCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-68310470635566636202013-09-20T02:21:37.857+01:002013-09-20T02:21:37.857+01:00Very visual images, spiraling rain threads turning...Very visual images, spiraling rain threads turning into tears, mingling with thoughts and uplifting by sun beams...very life-affirming, and last line 'I treasure the promise<br />Around my trembling heart.' ~ hope is always with us ~ a vibrant poemhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-53395403311247481192013-09-20T00:17:48.358+01:002013-09-20T00:17:48.358+01:00This feels solemn, reverent. I really like that f...This feels solemn, reverent. I really like that final beautiful stanza especially. Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-84161051738315417902013-09-19T19:54:34.522+01:002013-09-19T19:54:34.522+01:00this is lovely! i hope you will consider submitti...this is lovely! i hope you will consider submitting a piece to PilgrimsPoem.com like this. aloha!BYYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11946777661226248886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-92038177045811940432013-09-19T19:09:41.211+01:002013-09-19T19:09:41.211+01:00I so resonate with these words - the grief that &q...I so resonate with these words - the grief that "mingles with time and age just past the center"......and I, too, love the "stroke of hope" and the promise that lifts that "trembling heart". Lovely. Very evocative.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-89529825477552349252013-09-19T13:36:04.330+01:002013-09-19T13:36:04.330+01:00...i can sense a better beginning after all these ......i can sense a better beginning after all these griefs... you managed to give this piece balance t'ward the end... i enjoyed this... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-8192294800815997932013-09-19T13:04:51.894+01:002013-09-19T13:04:51.894+01:00The promise indeed gives us hope, Alan, and is som...The promise indeed gives us hope, Alan, and is something to be treasured.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-12784971591580528942013-09-19T11:37:05.963+01:002013-09-19T11:37:05.963+01:00Hi Alan,
I like how this takes you to a place tha...Hi Alan,<br /><br />I like how this takes you to a place that one thinks of as despair and then turns it into a feeling of hope that everything will work out and there is almost a joyfulness about the end as if a promise that they will one day be together again. I think it is a good poem about how love know no boundaries between people that love each other and somehow they are always together and will somehow see each other again. I think this is what keeps the people still alive. That someday they will be with their loved ones. Truly brings tears to my eyes. I guess we will always have a fascination with what happens to those who pass on.<br /><br />Thanks for a poem that makes us think about something we would rather not even though we think about it at different times and for sharing it with us at Theme Thursday. I hope you have a peaceful weekend and maybe find some fascinating things to do.<br /><br />God bless.Mrsupolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01563854387767106508noreply@blogger.com