tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post4274702467933185727..comments2023-10-24T12:50:38.199+01:00Comments on A Crimson Thread: My Neighboralan1704http://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-19528630850383014682013-08-08T16:53:24.673+01:002013-08-08T16:53:24.673+01:00my oh my.....slightly sinister in a way.my oh my.....slightly sinister in a way.Kathe W.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-57489857748388379452013-08-03T12:25:56.137+01:002013-08-03T12:25:56.137+01:00A simple everyday occurrence depicted so vividly.i...A simple everyday occurrence depicted so vividly.i saw him too.Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-43535873385099740972013-08-03T04:07:59.862+01:002013-08-03T04:07:59.862+01:00Wow, says much in few words. Very Williams-esque i...Wow, says much in few words. Very Williams-esque in the way it makes the reader fill in more details in imagination, while the poem itself says everything essential.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-22281426501267994022013-08-03T03:36:46.392+01:002013-08-03T03:36:46.392+01:00Vivid and lucid!Vivid and lucid!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-47930344871598266372013-08-02T19:37:29.297+01:002013-08-02T19:37:29.297+01:00A vivid vignette, Alan!A vivid vignette, Alan!Walt Wojtanikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02723314300320671675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-11536141937836111982013-08-02T15:19:51.057+01:002013-08-02T15:19:51.057+01:00Very interesting poem. I do not know the prompt, ...Very interesting poem. I do not know the prompt, but I don't need to. Also, loved reading the comments.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-49860574293723853262013-08-02T15:19:20.464+01:002013-08-02T15:19:20.464+01:00Very interesting poem. I do not know the prompt, ...Very interesting poem. I do not know the prompt, but I don't need to. Also, loved reading the comments.Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-10088933602841200262013-08-02T13:54:11.238+01:002013-08-02T13:54:11.238+01:00vivid image... felt like lending a hand...vivid image... felt like lending a hand...Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-8205452218630579122013-08-02T05:06:20.784+01:002013-08-02T05:06:20.784+01:00I could see that person. In fact, right now, after...I could see that person. In fact, right now, after a killer week, I likely AM that person! Cackle. Well done, kiddo!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-87696559332579675262013-08-01T21:42:02.964+01:002013-08-01T21:42:02.964+01:00so much in so few words. pain and compassion in a ...so much in so few words. pain and compassion in a fine visual picture. this was very nice!!Pratyushhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07916077557676904104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-7177849155146027302013-08-01T20:01:41.918+01:002013-08-01T20:01:41.918+01:00You've made coldness sound like beauty.You've made coldness sound like beauty.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06533340171645309120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-29465298167396603432013-08-01T12:14:23.647+01:002013-08-01T12:14:23.647+01:00...sad at times how the best help we can lend to s......sad at times how the best help we can lend to someone is just to watch & understand more than to feel pity... loved this Alan... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-1839564685331348372013-08-01T05:54:49.844+01:002013-08-01T05:54:49.844+01:00THe shuffling could be anything from a slow gait t...THe shuffling could be anything from a slow gait to Thorazine! This was right on the money concerning the prompt - had that Williams feel of the everyday made special. I liked this very much. AmySharp Little Pencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/07/30/one-last-good-day-for-mama/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-20576369311760983312013-08-01T00:25:26.844+01:002013-08-01T00:25:26.844+01:00This saddens me really, but probably he was hoping...This saddens me really, but probably he was hoping no one would notice.... That makes me wonder really if people would prefer others notice their difficulties or pretend not to see them.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-83054303484897112862013-07-31T23:52:31.576+01:002013-07-31T23:52:31.576+01:00'slowly shuffling' - important point, how ...'slowly shuffling' - important point, how many of them when we drive...patience - vital...humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-35413161090168467072013-07-31T21:48:53.041+01:002013-07-31T21:48:53.041+01:00Such a strong image in these few lines. Quite wond...Such a strong image in these few lines. Quite wonderful Alan.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-38322051116439857672013-07-31T21:41:14.191+01:002013-07-31T21:41:14.191+01:00Alan,
A shivery kind of observation, but very cap...Alan,<br /><br />A shivery kind of observation, but very captavating with the fine detail.<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-60708618904742109352013-07-31T20:31:43.016+01:002013-07-31T20:31:43.016+01:00Great capture I could visualize =)Great capture I could visualize =)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com