tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post944815536280662490..comments2023-10-24T12:50:38.199+01:00Comments on A Crimson Thread: Octoberalan1704http://www.blogger.com/profile/16068631142963794991noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-17152026296815068222013-10-01T07:37:55.086+01:002013-10-01T07:37:55.086+01:00Autumn does have that feeling of being in-between....Autumn does have that feeling of being in-between. Though October in New Zealand is Spring!Suzyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05337531041006701719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-89304700208516255892013-09-29T03:04:04.332+01:002013-09-29T03:04:04.332+01:00" light’s remaining prism". that is so ..." light’s remaining prism". that is so niceartbyraehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04153847801206823450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-49600373607541909152013-09-26T11:20:12.850+01:002013-09-26T11:20:12.850+01:00I like the second stanza best.I like the second stanza best.irenehttp://orangeisafruit.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-44636027234175423132013-09-26T06:04:17.326+01:002013-09-26T06:04:17.326+01:00But it gives hope:)But it gives hope:)Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-84915106310881063002013-09-26T01:58:42.124+01:002013-09-26T01:58:42.124+01:00This is so enchanting, Alan... I especially like t...This is so enchanting, Alan... I especially like that opening stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-31657159583652754702013-09-26T00:15:55.005+01:002013-09-26T00:15:55.005+01:00living psalm. No wonder all of nature isn't o...living psalm. No wonder all of nature isn't often considered a "cathedral" by many. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-24269104819199931172013-09-25T23:04:03.689+01:002013-09-25T23:04:03.689+01:00I enjoyed the imagery as well as the variety of qu...I enjoyed the imagery as well as the variety of questions October triggers. I too liked the "living psalm".Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-37339528531174300592013-09-25T22:34:18.823+01:002013-09-25T22:34:18.823+01:00Love the imagery, beautiful poem.Love the imagery, beautiful poem.Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-9213740015689957442013-09-25T21:49:08.069+01:002013-09-25T21:49:08.069+01:00I like the images you put in this Alan--the clouds...I like the images you put in this Alan--the clouds and the returning autumn chill. You must have beautiful autumn leaves where you live. thanks for a good prompt and the poem as well.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-85122246028347755472013-09-25T21:14:48.465+01:002013-09-25T21:14:48.465+01:00nice...love the touch with the living psalm there ...nice...love the touch with the living psalm there in the end....i like the used of rugged twise as well...for a second i thought you have reTurned each in the end but just that one....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-20354807305152456562013-09-25T20:01:23.814+01:002013-09-25T20:01:23.814+01:00I like "a vision of tomorrow birthed in the s...I like "a vision of tomorrow birthed in the sleepless night..." I think a lot can be worked out at those sleepless times. I do like 'a living psalm' as well which seems to connect humanity with the divine.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-86542615279537450462013-09-25T19:34:48.037+01:002013-09-25T19:34:48.037+01:00The living Psalm evokes an unexplainable image / g...The living Psalm evokes an unexplainable image / glorious and eternal<br />so great to meet a fellow believer whose heart pours on the pagemoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-54505465188336065102013-09-25T19:34:30.714+01:002013-09-25T19:34:30.714+01:00The living Psalm evokes an unexplainable image / g...The living Psalm evokes an unexplainable image / glorious and eternal<br />so great to meet a fellow believer whose heart pours on the pagemoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-59774711131226520792013-09-25T19:31:38.538+01:002013-09-25T19:31:38.538+01:00This felt like a song of grief. The type one feel...This felt like a song of grief. The type one feels in Autumn. I agree with that your images are lovely.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-10637237532936727752013-09-25T19:28:21.719+01:002013-09-25T19:28:21.719+01:00Lovely images in your writing, Alan.
An overlay o...Lovely images in your writing, Alan.<br /><br /><em>An overlay of black cloud<br />Crept careful towards tomorrow<br />Into light’s remaining prism.</em><br /><br />And yes, there is the sadness (for me too)... and a maturer joy that comes as well.ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16012181529786952855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1123834935824480628.post-82150407753764793152013-09-25T19:24:49.258+01:002013-09-25T19:24:49.258+01:00Fall does make us beg the question regarding morta...Fall does make us beg the question regarding mortality and rebirth ... but first mortality and the fears and uncertainties it awakens in us (often 'in the dead of night'). This is such a thought-provoking piece, Alan.Susan Lindquisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04039551683129884367noreply@blogger.com