Poems. Prayers & Promises

Friday, 7 June 2013

Evolve

Don’t blow your breath on worry
Grasp the air
Surging up
Pushing into
A clouded mirror
Make your way
Towards light
Begin to stir
Reaching out to touch your presence
Struggle to connect
Drawn to light
Open up
Find the brightness
Discover wonder
Break out
And evolve
Into new life
Don’t blow your breath on worry
Set your spirit free
Worship

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Written for Theme Thursday


Inspired by a line from a poem by Brian Miller

6 comments:

  1. nice rhythm and the words are awesome. excellent, easy to read and has a great message.

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  2. A perfect evolution poem ... well done with the theme !!!

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  3. I like the rhythm and peacefulness of this poem. Makes one want to change things in their life and almost be born again into something new. Grasp the air makes me think that I must breath and jump out of the water and breathe in new life.

    Thanks for sharing such a restful poem with us for this weeks Theme Thursday. May your weekend be filled with many restful activities that renew your spirit.

    God bless.

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  4. :) worshiping will always lead us to peace and free from all the worries. We should never leave lord's hands.

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  5. Inspirational work! Impressed by its simplicity in portraying the idea. Keep evolving. Keep up the worship. :)

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