Poems, Prayers & Promises with Crimson woven into a Golden Strand
A very layered poem, infusing life into something lifeless
So wonderful when even the hardest of hearts can find forgiveness.
Forgiveness is a beautiful thing when we get to that place ... lovely piece :)
nice...love those seems of forgiveness...it is what makes life all the better...cause we all screw up occassionally...smiles...and mercy...
I love "ancient stones cry out", and the way the poem turns towards forgiveness. Beautiful.
this is quite lovely and I like how you used the "sendiments" for sentiments. and thanks for your always nice comments! Have a great day!
Beautiful poem .... beautiful message.
Mercy can indeed soften the heart!
Mercy can melt the granite too.loved it
Hard rock but nothing like giving way on forgiveness. It softens the soul! Nicely alan!Hank
Wonderful thought that even stone can soften and find forgiveness. Nice writing, Alan.
What a though and write.
One wonders if granite has magnetic currents running through,connecting us with past occurrences.
Mercy softens the heart, found in granite... that line especially stands out to me. Enjoyed your poem!
I love granite and its seams--a lovely poem:-)
Layers and seams within this poem ... I'll be thinking on this one for a few days ... and re-visiting to re-read.
Thank you for reading my poems. Please don't feel you have to comment. I enjoyed writing them, I hope you enjoyed reading them, Be blessed.